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'Til the Buzzer Sounds

38-year-old graphic designer Emmett Reeves lives in Duluth, Minnesota with his wife Lily and two kids - Ava and Evan. Despite Lily's reservations, Emmett continues playing recreational hockey, believing it teaches his kids to live fully. Emmett also encourages his talented hockey player daughter Ava to develop her skills.

After suffering persistent heartburn, Emmett is diagnosed with esophageal cancer. He undergoes chemotherapy, trying to balance treatment, family, and work. However, the cancer spreads to his ribs and liver. His doctor regretfully informs Emmett, who is now facing terminal illness, and Lily, who is newly pregnant, that treatments are now only palliative.

With only months left to live, Emmett is determined to continue playing hockey and inspire Ava to attend a USA Hockey national development camp, despite her fears of not being good enough. As Emmett's health rapidly declines, he takes time to thoughtfully write goodbye letters to his family.

Emmett passes away peacefully at home surrounded by loved ones. At his funeral, Ava shares how Emmett's zest for hockey and grace inspired her. Going through Emmett's desk, Lily finds his letter encouraging her to coach hockey.

Two months later, Lily coaches Ava's team. Ava attends the national camp wearing her father's jersey number. Emmett's team memorializes him by adding his initials and number to their jerseys, honoring his talents and passions.

  • Mike Alter
    Writer
  • Project Type:
    Screenplay
  • Number of Pages:
    90
  • Language:
    English
  • First-time Screenwriter:
    Yes
  • Student Project:
    No
  • Cannes Script Festival
    Cannes
    September 9, 2024
    Finalist
  • ISA Fasttrack Fellowship Spring 2024

    March 14, 2024
    Second Round
  • Tableread My Screenplay Park City 2024
    Park City
    Quarterfinalist
  • Cambridge Script Festival

    May 1, 2024
    Finalist
  • Chicago Script Awards
    Chicago
    June 21, 2024
    Official Selection
  • Table Read My Screenplay Hollywood
    Hollywood
    August 22, 2024
    Semi-finalist
Writer Biography - Mike Alter

I've been a Pulmonary, Critical Care, and Sleep physician in St. Paul, Minnesota for 24 years now attempting to turn screenwriter. I completed UCLA's Professional Program in screenwriting in 2023.

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Writer Statement

This is the second screenplay I wrote during my UCLA Professional Program. It was a finalist at the Cannes Script Festival Summer Season 2024, Cambridge Script Awards Spring Season 2024, was a semifinalist at Tableread My Screenplay – Hollywood 2024, and took honorable mention at the Hollywood International Indie Screenplay Awards 2024. It is based on the life of one of my hockey teammates who tragically succumbed to cancer at the age of 35. This story is a tribute to him and his incredible drive and humanity. I've completed two other screenplays spanning multiple genres including drama, horror and action-drama.