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The Unfinished Line
After the death of his father, a retired pastor who served faithfully for nearly four decades, Sonny Oldham returns home expecting closure. Instead, while sorting through his father’s belongings, he discovers a handwritten bucket list—most of it completed. Seven adventures remain unchecked. And beneath them, one final entry:
To better understand the Gospels in today’s world.
Sonny is unsettled. His father preached those Gospels for forty years. What was left to understand?
At the urging of his wife, Theresa, Sonny decides to complete the list—not as a spiritual pilgrimage, but as a tribute. With the farm recently sold and their responsibilities behind them, the couple sets out across the country to finish what his father began.
Each journey brings them into contact with an unexpected guide—modern men whose names echo the apostles and whose lives embody the very truths Sonny has long defended but never deeply examined. A weathered fishing captain named Peter teaches him that redemption requires courage and steadfastness. A former hedge fund analyst named Matthew reveals how allegiance to comfort can quietly own a life. A hospice nurse named John shows him that love is less about argument and more about presence. A prison reform advocate named Paul reminds him that the law exposes guilt, but grace transforms hearts. A contractor named James insists that faith must bear weight and fix what is broken. A university professor named Jude demonstrates conviction without hostility. And in a struggling border clinic, a physician named Luke and a documentarian named Mark reveal that compassion makes people visible—and that the story matters.
Along the way, Theresa records their experiences in a journal, capturing lessons Sonny is only beginning to absorb. What starts as a series of completed tasks slowly becomes something deeper: not an explanation of faith, but participation in it.
By the time the final journey ends, Sonny realizes the unfinished line on his father’s list was never about acquiring new theology. It was about living what had long been preached.
Back home, in the quiet of night, Sonny reads Theresa’s reflections and finally understands what his father meant. Understanding the Gospel is not about defending doctrine. It is about embodying redemption, reordering allegiance, choosing love, embracing grace, building what lasts, guarding what matters, and telling the story through compassion.
He crosses out the final line.
Not because he has mastered it—but because he has entered it.
The Unfinished Line is a reflective, character-driven drama about legacy, marriage, and the quiet transformation that occurs when faith moves from inheritance to experience. It asks not what we believe, but how we live—and reminds us that some truths aren’t explained. They’re lived.
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David MillerWriter
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Project Type:Screenplay
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Number of Pages:94
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Language:English
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First-time Screenwriter:No
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Student Project:No
David A. Miller is a produced and award-winning multidisciplinary storyteller whose work spans political thrillers, faith-based dramas, and romantic adventures set against vivid global backdrops. He has written and adapted multiple feature screenplays and novels, including the high-stakes cyber-thriller And Justices for All, the inspirational Deep Within Us, and the multi-award winning Italian romance 21 Lemons, 21 Days.
Drawing on a background in technology and business, David blends cinematic pacing with layered characters and rich sense-of-place-from the Amalfi Coast to small-town Arkansas. His projects often explore themes of justice, redemption, and the resilience of the human spirit.
Beyond the page, David is an entrepreneur and branding strategist, developing luxury hospitality concepts and artisanal food and beverage brands. He brings the same vision and dedication to his creative collaborations, seeking producers, investors, and fellow artists who share a passion for compelling, character-driven stories.