Script Files
Potential Killers
Logline: Potential Killers – A Romantic Farce - with LGBTQ themes
From a loving father of a Trans Daughter.
In 1976 Hollywood, ten twisted lives unravel into chaos and potential murder while held at gunpoint in a second-story studio apartment.
Many thanks to Danny Simon for mentoring me in his comedy class while writing Potential Killers. Danny taught us to write what we know, and these colorful characters are based on the people I met my first year of living above the California Surplus Market at the corner of Santa Monica and Vine back in 1976.
Based on the stage play.
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Market‑Viability Statement:
Set in a single Hollywood apartment in 1976, Potential Killers delivers a high‑impact romantic farce built for profitability: a contained-location ensemble comedy with ten standout roles, a nostalgic period aesthetic that audiences consistently stream, and a hybrid premise - hostage thriller meets Hollywood satire—that offers a bold, marketable hook at a low production cost. Designed for fast turnaround, strong festival play, and broad international appeal, the film combines commercial efficiency with elevated character-driven storytelling, making it an ideal investment for producers seeking a distinctive, low‑risk, high‑return feature.
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Synopsis: Potential Killers – A Romantic Farce - with LGBTQ themes
Hollywood, 1976. Above a dusty Army Surplus store at Santa Monica and Vine, ten strangers find themselves trapped in a second‑story studio apartment, held at gunpoint as their twisted lives unravel into chaos. What begins as a tense standoff quickly spirals into a psychological showdown where secrets, betrayals, and long‑buried wounds surface under the pressure of imminent violence.
Zana Granger, a wide‑eyed Midwestern newcomer, collides with Jimmy Peterson, a kind‑hearted but lost product of a broken showbiz dynasty. His mother, Crystal, a faded starlet drowning in drink and regret, and his father Andre, a once powerful producer who is a flop away from disaster, embody Hollywood’s corrosive glamour. Lynnie Bray, a desperate actress willing to sleep her way into fame, and Midnight Taboo, a flamboyant black actor stuck being a female impersonator, bring ambition and artifice to the room, while Taboo’s brother Jerome tries to keep control as his agent and protector.
Presiding over the building is Ms. Table, a blind former ballerina whose eccentricity masks sharp instincts. Into this volatile mix steps Iker Marroquin Jr., a mixed up eighteen‑year‑old Latino, fresh from juvenile detention, brimming with anger and confusion, and his estranged father Lieutenant Iker Marroquin Sr., fifties, a plainclothes cop, desperate to reconnect with the son he lost.
As the gun remains trained on them, alliances shift, accusations fly, and each character’s flaws are laid bare. The claustrophobic studio becomes a crucible where Hollywood dreams collide with human desperation. Every revelation raises the stakes: who among them is capable of murder, and who will survive the night?
Potential Killers is a tense, hilarious character‑driven ensemble farce - an explosive chamber dramedy where ten fractured lives intersect in one room, forcing each to confront the darkness within.
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Three core factors make Potential Killers unusually well‑positioned to turn a profit if produced, and each ties directly to the strengths already built into the concept, the characters, and the chamber‑farce structure.
1. A contained, ensemble-driven story keeps production costs low while maximizing performance value.
A single primary location - a cramped 1976 studio apartment above an Army Surplus store - means the film can be shot quickly, with minimal company moves, limited set builds, and a tight shooting schedule.
At the same time, the script gives ten actors rich, funny, emotionally volatile roles that attract talent looking for showcase material. That combination - low overhead + high actor appeal - is one of the most reliable profitability formulas in indie filmmaking.
Why this matters financially:
• Contained-location comedies and thrillers historically recoup faster because they avoid runaway budgets.
• Strong ensemble roles attract recognizable actors at reasonable rates because the material itself is the draw.
• Festivals and streamers love “single-location pressure cookers” because they’re easy to market and easy to program.
2. The 1976 Hollywood setting taps into a proven nostalgia market with cross‑generational appeal.
Audiences consistently respond to period pieces that blend glamour, grit, and comedy - especially when they expose the absurdity of showbiz culture. The 1970s, in particular, is a sweet spot: visually iconic, musically rich, and culturally chaotic in a way that feels both retro and relevant.
Why this matters financially:
• Nostalgia-driven films perform well on streaming platforms, where viewers gravitate toward stylized, escapist worlds.
• The 1970s aesthetic - costumes, music cues, neon signage, analog grime - creates a distinctive marketing identity without requiring blockbuster budgets.
• Hollywood‑about‑Hollywood stories remain evergreen because they appeal to both industry insiders and general audiences who love peeking behind the curtain.
3. A hybrid genre - romantic farce + hostage thriller - creates a unique hook that stands out in a crowded market.
The story blends high-stakes tension with comedic chaos, romantic entanglements, and character-driven revelations. That tonal mix is rare, memorable, and highly marketable. It positions the film as a “festival darling” type of project: bold, funny, surprising, and emotionally charged.
Why this matters financially:
• Hybrid genres travel well internationally because physical comedy, relationship conflict, and suspense translate across cultures.
• Streamers actively seek films that feel familiar enough to attract viewers but different enough to stand out in thumbnails and trailers.
• The premise - ten strangers trapped at gunpoint as their secrets explode - is instantly pitchable, instantly trailer-friendly, and instantly meme-able.
"Dedicated to the Real Midnight Taboo who gave me an apple while I bounced outside The Traffic Jam in Detroit, and told me he put a spell on me after I took a bite, then walked into the bar and shot his pimp in the back of the head while he selected a song on the Jukebox in 1973." I'm still possessed.
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Karl J NiemiecWriter
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Project Type:Screenplay, Stage Play, Television Script
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Number of Pages:118
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First-time Screenwriter:No
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Student Project:No
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Digital Cinema Package:Unavailable
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30th Annual Fade In Awards Comedy Competition EmailHollywood
June 1, 2022
Simi-Finalist -
Lit Laughs International Comedy Film Festivalst roberts Club Harrogate, Yorkshire
April 10, 2026
Finalist
Former IUPUI adjunct professor Karl J. Niemiec is the grandson of Detroit Polish mobsters portrayed in his book and screenplay, The Polish Gang – 1929. Raised in the small country town of Jonesville, Michigan, near the Ohio border, Karl grew up working on farms, playing sports, shooting guns, and riding horses. He now lives in Carmel, Indiana, with his wife and four children, where he writes love stories that blend heart, humor, and grit across multiple genres using The Inside Pitch-recommended How to Be a Prolific Screenwriter, originally developed at UCLA Extension, and taught at IUPUI.
AFTRA/SAG - WGA Eligible
Can attend your festival.
Love stories because the world needs more.
I believe who I’m looking for is one person away.
And I’m ready to be put to work. From a full outline it takes me about 10 days to reach a workable first draft. Even wrote a book on how I do it and taught it at IUPUI after developing it at UCLA.
Amazon: https://a.co/d/gBofQTd
More about the Author:
Karl J. Niemiec writes heartfelt love stories across multiple genres and lives with his wife and four children in Carmel, Indiana.
A former Los Angeles resident, Karl relocated to Indiana in 2006 and began teaching at IUPUI as an Adjunct Professor. There, he taught courses based on his bestselling books Write to Be Published and The Inside Pitch-recommended How to Be a Prolific Screenwriter, originally developed at UCLA Extension.
Two documentary projects he and his family produced when they first arrived were:
“This Is Why - Why Do Six Garbage Trucks Go By My House In One Day?” Karl gifted the project to the city of Carmel and Mayor Brainard to help him implement his plan to get all of Carmel on one garbage and recycling service. After it passed, the Niemiecs were given a Carmel Green Environment Award by the Carmel City Council.
And "Special - Give Us A Game", an 8 year study of The Michigan Far Flyers, a Special Needs Hockey team created and coached by Karl’s brother Ben Niemiec and the team's quest to find other teams like them to play. The 60 minute documentary on Amazon inspired "The Indy Twisters" to form right here in Carmel, Indiana.
https://www.facebook.com/indytwisters/
Karl's Written, Acted, Directed Film Festival Projects Include:
Law of Average - In the Endless City - a proof of concept Neo-Noir Series Pilot - Won the LA Film and Script Neo-Noir Film Fest.
Out of the Coffin - Short premiered at Haunted Newport, Rhode Island, also screened at The Santa Monica Film Fest and The Indianapolis Gen Con.
To Answer Your Question - Short Screened at the Great Lakes International Film Festival.
Don't Tell Mom - Family Covid Short - Screened at the International Mobile Film Festival
His teaching journey continued as he directed nine parent acclaimed hit children's musicals, which opened the door to instructing students of all ages at the YMCA, Monon Center, and KjN Studio. The Studio’s signature on-camera technique, The Hero Face, stems from Karl’s private training in ABC’s film library—an experience that saw him move from the mailroom to on-screen roles on General Hospital and Welcome Back, Kotter.
Karl’s passion for performance and storytelling is showcased in his book Audition Monologues That Work, five scenes from which earned IMDb credits. Two of these scenes were selected for film festivals—three of which premiered locally at The Box Film Studio, home to the Indiana Film Network's monthly gatherings.
His expertise in screenwriting and directing led to national opportunities, including a recurring role directing Agent/Manager audition scenes at showcases back in Los Angeles. These biannual events also involved directing and editing actor reels while shooting a day-and-the-life production of the actors and their families from across the country.
Today, Karl continues to write and adapt his screenplays into stage plays, novels, audiobooks, and even game boards to broaden his projects' marketability using the same simple five reformatting techniques that spawned The Game of Halloween inside How to Be a Prolific Screenwriter.