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Burning Water

Unforgiven meets There Will Be Blood —

In 1879 Arizona Territory, outlaw Tom Burroughs is wounded during a train robbery and taken by his partners, brothers Wade and Jack Martin, to their sister Claire's isolated ranch. Claire saves his life, and during his recovery Tom encounters something he has never known: stability, dignity, and the possibility of redemption. Choosing to abandon his violent past, Tom stays, marries Claire, and builds a ranching life defined by hard work and family.

Years later, they have a young daughter, Alice, and Tom has become a devoted father who refuses to carry a gun, determined that his past will never touch his family.

Their peaceful life is shattered when Empire Mining, led by the ruthless Marcus Blackwood, diverts the creek that sustains the valley's ranchers, intending to force them off their land. Tom emerges as an unlikely leader, organizing the ranchers to fight the corporation through the courts rather than violence. Against overwhelming odds, they win, and Empire is ordered to restore the water. But Blackwood, humiliated and enraged, secretly hires killers to destroy Tom's ranch as punishment. One night, Tom's home is burned to the ground while his family sleeps inside. Tom and Claire manage to save their daughter, but Claire is mortally wounded rescuing Tom. She dies in his arms as the life they built together is reduced to ashes.

Grief-stricken and abandoned by a legal system powerless against corporate influence, Tom faces Hamlet's oldest dilemma — avenge the woman he loved, or honor her memory by remaining the man she made him.

But where Hamlet hesitated, Tom acts. He retrieves the gun he swore he would never carry again and sets out to hunt the men responsible. Each step draws him further from the peaceful father he became and deeper into the outlaw he once was — risking not only his life but his daughter's future.

Burning Water is the story of a man who escaped violence to build a family — and who discovers, too late, that the descent into vengeance destroys the very soul it was meant to honor.

  • Loren Davis
    Writer
    13 Steps, Whippoorwill
  • Project Type:
    Screenplay
  • Genres:
    Western, Drama
  • Number of Pages:
    112
  • Language:
    English
  • First-time Screenwriter:
    No
  • Student Project:
    No
  • Digital Cinema Package:
    Unavailable
  • ISA Emerging Screenwriters

    April 7, 2026
    Award Winner
  • Wiki
Writer Biography - Loren Davis

Screenwriter | Retired Fire Chief
A lifetime of leadership and lived experience fuels my character-driven narratives. I don't just imagine high-stakes scenarios—I've commanded them, navigated them, and survived them. This background brings a visceral authenticity to the page that can't be faked.

• Leadership & High-Stakes Drama: Retired Fire Chief with decades of experience managing crises, leading teams under extreme pressure, and understanding human nature in life-or-death moments—informing authentic character arcs and conflict.

• Action & Precision: Accomplished Search-and-Rescue Pilot and Motorcycle Racer with direct experience in aviation, mechanics, and the physical/mental demands of high-speed competition—bringing unparalleled realism to action sequences.

• Unique Worlds & Character Dynamics: Former Dolphin Trainer and Whale Researcher, providing deep insight into non-verbal communication, behavior, and the dynamics of working in isolated, high-stakes environments—fueling stories with unique settings and relationships.

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