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13 Steps

"True Grit" meets "The Road"

The story is narrated by an OLDER ALICE, reflecting on her childhood. We meet TOM BURROUGHS, a feared outlaw, and his six-year-old daughter, ALICE, as they camp in the desert. Their tender, loving relationship is immediately established, with Tom's hardened exterior melting only for her.

Tom, along with the volatile WILL and his quicker, more easygoing brother JACK, robs a mine payroll stagecoach in Prescott. The heist goes violently wrong. The stage guard and Will kill each other in a shootout, Tom is shot, and Jack is killed by the bartender, HENRY. Amid the chaos, Tom spares an unarmed observer, COLE, a man with a pastor's collar.

Wounded, Tom retrieves Alice but is soon pursued by a posse. To save Alice from being caught in the crossfire, he surrenders. In a heartbreaking scene, he entrusts Alice to Cole, extracting a promise for her safety.

A week later, Tom is marched to the gallows. In a final, powerful scene, he says goodbye to Alice, who is now clean and dressed in a new dress, cared for by Cole and his wife, SARAH. He ascends the 13 steps to his death, finding peace in seeing his daughter walk away to a better life. The film ends with Alice retrieving her forgotten wooden bear from the mud, a symbol of her father's love, as her older self narrates how Cole and Sarah raised her, allowing his legacy to be one of love and hope, not violence.

  • Loren Davis
    Writer
  • Project Type:
    Short Script
  • Genres:
    Western
  • Number of Pages:
    26
  • Language:
    English
  • First-time Screenwriter:
    No
  • Student Project:
    No
  • Digital Cinema Package:
    Unavailable
  • Winner - Santa Barbara International ShortFest

    February 20, 2024
  • Winner - California International Shorts Festival

    March 12, 2024
    Best Short Screenplay
  • Winner - Hollywood Just 4 Shorts

    February 29, 2024
    Best Short Screenplay
  • Winner - Indie Short Fest

    Best Short Screenplay
  • Winner - Top Shorts Film Festival

    Best Short Screenplay
  • Winner - Vegas Shorts

    July 27, 2023
    Best Short Screenplay
  • Winner - Bass and Belle Wild West Film Fest

    August 31, 2023
    Best Western Screenplay
  • Finalist - The Wild Bunch Film Festival

    September 4, 2023
    Best Short Western Screenplay
  • Finalist - Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards
  • Finalist - Southern California Screenplay
  • Semi-Finalist - Filmmatic Short Screenplay Awards
  • Semi-Finalist - San Antonio Film Festival
  • Semi-Finalist - San Francisco Arthouse Shorts Festival
  • Semi-Finalist - Cannes Arts Fest
  • Finalist - Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards

    Best Short Screenplay
  • #1 - Red List - Short Western Screenplay
Writer Biography - Loren Davis

Retired fire chief and award winning screenwriter. Faculty member at Santa Rosa Junior College. Former dolphin trainer and whale scientist. Search and rescue pilot. Baja, desert, and motocross racer. You name it , I've probably done it and now using those experiences for background to challenging character driven stories.

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