Sent Away
LOGLINE: Forced to stay with their ex-convict dad for a summer, two boys discover a dark family secret that leads them to run away rather than return to their mom and abusive stepfather.
SYNOPSIS: MICHAEL (13) and DAVY (11) live in constant fear of their abusive stepfather FRANK, so when their mother MARY tells them they will be staying with their father ETHAN for a summer, they should be happy, but they don’t know Ethan; he’s been in prison for 9 years for killing a home intruder. Michael has flashbacks of a dead body with a knife in it. After an awkward start with Ethan, Michael and Davy discover he is kinder and gentler than Frank, so they beg their mother to stay through the school year, but she says no. When Ethan sees signs of Frank’s abuse on the boys’ bodies, he determines to go for custody, despite his prison record.
At the custody hearing, the judge refuses to hear the boys’ testimony and orders them returned to Mary and Frank. Horrified and despairing, the boys concoct a hasty plan to run away and hide in the woods. Ethan helps by leaving the boys alone to give them time to make their escape. When Frank and Mary arrive to pick up the boys and find them gone, Frank beats Ethan into a coma, believing him to be hiding the boys himself.
Hiding out in the forest with Davy, Michael remembers an additional detail about the night of the murder: someone else was in the house that night. He and Davy leave their hiding place to share the information with Ethan, but find him in the hospital. Outside the hospital, Frank catches them and forces them into his truck. As Frank drives them back toward their old life, Michael manages—with the help of a friend’s voicemail—to record Frank confessing to killing the intruder himself and framing Ethan—with the help of Mary. Not long after Frank returns home with the boys, the police show up to arrest both Frank and Mary. Ethan’s conviction gets set aside, and he’s awarded permanent custody of Michael and Davy.
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Joel McElvaneyWriterDragons of the Gloaming; Lockdown Generation
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Project Type:Screenplay
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Number of Pages:97
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Country of Origin:United States
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Language:English
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First-time Screenwriter:No
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Student Project:No
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Finish Line Script Competition
November 9, 2021
Quarterfinalist -
Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards
January 31, 2022
Semi-finalist -
Atlanta Film Festival Screenplay CompetitionAtlanta, GA
April 2, 2022
Semi-finalist -
Emerging Screenwriters Genre Screenplay Competition
June 8, 2023
Quarterfinalist -
Filmmatic Inroads Fellowship Season 5
June 8, 2023
Quarterfinalist -
Selling Your Screenplay SYS's Six-Figure Screenplay Contest
June 8, 2023
2nd Rounder
A former high school teacher and screenwriting instructor, McElvaney has spent most of his life helping others craft meaningful, emotionally-resonant stories. Now a full-time screenwriter himself, McElvaney applies a deep understanding of structure and character development to his features, which often show what happens when the underestimated and overlooked take action.
Just getting started in the industry, McElvaney has fared well in screenplay competitions with his risque TV dramedy pilot Not Swingers, a 2nd-rounder at AFF in 2022; his fantasy action/comedy Dragons of the Gloaming, a Top 5 Finalist in the 2021 Save the Cat! Screenplay Challenge; and his coming-of-age drama/thriller Sent Away, a Semi-Finalist in the 2022 Atlanta Film Festival Screenplay Competition.
In a writers' room or on a set, McElvaney brings a veteran teacher's comfort with collaboration and the ability to adjust on the fly.
At its core, Sent Away is a hopeful story about the endurance of a father’s love and the powerful bond between two brothers who must navigate a dangerous and cruel world in their quest for independence and justice. As a practical matter, the film would require only a small cast and a few commonplace shooting locations.